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My reviews and critiques are meant to help writers fix common story and structure problems and help writers understand how to create stories that engage and satisfy an audience. Reviews are also meant to help folks self-publishing a novel to overcome common story problems or to help with revisions of already self-published work. My reviews and critiques are submitted in writing, but I'm also happy to chat with clients.
Notes on the first three chapters of a novel (or first 50 pages), $25. Includes 2-3 pages of feedback, some line editing and notes on sentence structure.
Notes on a 120 page screenplay run 2-3 pages. I offer comments on story structure, some line editing, and my recommendations on formatting for new screenwriters. Cost, $50; $60 if a script is emailed to me for printing and return mailing in the US. Time line for Notes is a week.
Mindy and Clark Kohanek, Return to Sender, a novel set on the Oregon
Coast about a Catholic priest who with some old warriors set out to send evil back to hell and a few good souls to heaven.
Nancy Schoellkopf's Yellow-Billed Magpie is one novel in her sacred path home series. It is a love story, a spiritual journey, a quest to look beyond appearances to
the mystical rhythms that guide the human heart.
Dr. Philip Shapiro's Healing Power offers a ten-step, self-help model that he uses himself and teaches to his students and patients
to help them find inner peace and healing.
Kwik Jones is an amazing playwright who has been produced around the United States. He can be
followed on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/kwik.jones.
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